I love the ghostly feel of this shot, its dark but works as is though what Amber says could be interesting.

If you play with the curves in photoshop and make the whites a bit lighter you might get better depth of focus, the eyes will travel further down the path shown and it will become alive, the imagination will ignite.

For this I give the three stars, for vision is definitely a full on 5 if not 10!

Overall great framing and capture, your post processing definitely adds to the overall impact of ghostly, I don't know if that was your intention but my minds eye goes there.

Keep up the good work, your photos are candy for the eyes!